The idea has changed so that there is more emotion and a point to the story,
whereas before it would have visually looked good but been overly bland.
Idea:
Norman/ The Man has had a hard day at work, he is walking down the town's streets with his umbrella.
The wind is blowing and starts to tug and pull on his umbrella. he is fighting back with it to try and get the umbrella back under control.
He manages to get in under control, sighs and continues walking until a piece of paper flies into his face.
He removes it looking quite angry, and throws it to the ground.
*says a line that I am currently unsure of*
He takes another step forward and steps in a puddle, he looks down at the ground and then screams in frustration.
He begins to step his feet in angry until he stamps to hard and falls through the puddle.
Character:
Norman.
Setting:
Town street, old fashioned buildings.
Motivation:
To get home and relax.
Obstacles:
The uncontrollable weather.
Emotion:
Anger, annoyance, tiredness.
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